英検2級ライティングの添削をお願いしますm(__)m Topic Some people say that Japan should accept more people from other countries to work in Japan. Do you agree with this opinion? I agree that Japan should accept more people from other countries to work in Japan. I have two reasons. Firstly, Japan needs more working people. For example, Japan has many elderly people, but it has only few young people. Secondly, Japanese people should accept many cultures more than now. For instance, Japanese people sometimes hate different cultures but it is not good for people to live comfortable in Japan. That is why, I think that Japan should accept more people from other countries to work in Japan.
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